Disco Ball Colourful What do you think of my poems?
im a girl, who is 13 years old, and i write poetry, as a hobby, cuz i really wanna take on poetry when i grow older, can you guys edit my poems? or give suggestions.
These are about nature.
Acrostic=
Nearly
Always
Tantalizing
Un-broken and broken hearts, and
Relentless
Emotions
Haiku=
Colourful leaves sway,
in the sweet brisk autumn air
just before they fall
Cinquain=
moonlight
silver and bright
just like a disco ball
shimmers, and adds splendor, to the
night sky
Limerick=
The cherry blosoms swaying gently,
i gaze at their beauty intently
look at the soothing light pink coloured japanese splendor
however, the wind picks up, and does scatter them as if released from a broken blendor
(and i need one more line, but i havent gotten to that yet:P)
please and thank you! Ill choose best answer asap.
i usually write free verse, but i wanted to try different styles xD
For me the most memorable poetry is the free verse, and longer poems not pages necessarily but a page or half?
try longer poems to add to your stock of knowledge and open up a new way to write.
I'm getting married in October, Halloween, to be exact. Me and my to be husband, don't want a fancy wedding. We want a slick, laid back wedding, with colorful cakes- cookie cakes. We both love to dance, just not slow dance. To be honest, instead of a wedding dress, I want a ripped black mini dress. My parents won't mind. I'm an orphan. And my fiance, he wants ripped up jeans, black shirt with a jean vest. We are party maniacs, I guess. At the ceremony, we also want to dance a lot. So what's a good place?
I want a disco ball. Is it possible????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????//
That sounds awesome! Why don't you look into renting any old, abandoned movie theaters in your area? They would give off that perfect, haunted gothic vibe. Also, sometimes they turn old churches into nightclubs. We have one in Denver called The Church, where they spin lots of Goth and techno- that would be a pretty cool place for a wedding like you're describing. Just start thinking outside the box- walk around your neighborhood and look for any old warehouses or clubs you might be able to rent for the day.
Wrong, Wrong, Wrong… Actually this is what happened: In the beginning, there was Cher and Cher said let there be light and a hundred dancing boys appeared at the local gay bar in heaven while Cher descended from a crystal disco ball… But, Cher was still lonely, so she created a man: Adam… Because Cher was busy singing and having cosmetic procedures to retain her youth, she created Eve for Adam. She also created Steve for Adam to double his chance for a date on Saturday nights… Cher saw what she had created and she was very pleased.
they are real they are real (just slightly firm) and sadly one wouldn't fit in our pad even if i managed to rob oneand beth we have danced many an afternoon under the world's greatest disco ball – i'd imagined you in kentucky or tucson or in a trailer park somewhere desolate and not in yorkshire. must look at profiles more.the fenchurch flier sounds a wonderous machine – we'll be on it.and bltp distracting is my middle namex
It caught my attention when I saw the Disco Ball too. =)
I tend to agree with Dima that there are people paying it for keep on selling.
Given you can answer the first 3 'why's, the last 'why' you have is the easiest. Facebook can't say it will be expired, because this virtual thing is supposed to be there FOREVER. She needs a reason to renew the “gift” and those people who bought, pay again. Nothing economics or value adding behind it.
Wrong, Wrong, Wrong… Actually this is what happened: In the beginning, there was Cher and Cher said let there be light and a hundred dancing boys appeared at the local gay bar in heaven while Cher descended from a crystal disco ball… But, Cher was still lonely, so she created a man: Adam… Because Cher was busy singing and having cosmetic procedures to retain her youth, she created Eve for Adam. She also created Steve for Adam to double his chance for a date on Saturday nights… Cher saw what she had created and she was very pleased.
they are real they are real (just slightly firm) and sadly one wouldn't fit in our pad even if i managed to rob oneand beth we have danced many an afternoon under the world's greatest disco ball – i'd imagined you in kentucky or tucson or in a trailer park somewhere desolate and not in yorkshire. must look at profiles more.the fenchurch flier sounds a wonderous machine – we'll be on it.and bltp distracting is my middle namex
It caught my attention when I saw the Disco Ball too. =)
I tend to agree with Dima that there are people paying it for keep on selling.
Given you can answer the first 3 'why's, the last 'why' you have is the easiest. Facebook can't say it will be expired, because this virtual thing is supposed to be there FOREVER. She needs a reason to renew the “gift” and those people who bought, pay again. Nothing economics or value adding behind it.